Layout: Opinions on my Design Site

started by Alex Luckhardt on Nov 4, 2007 — RSS Feed

Sam Smith Sam Smith
Posts: 0

Alex, I found your design to have clean lines and easy navigation. It is appealing and straight forward and addresses its intended use very well. If pressed to make a suggestion; you may want to focus on the copywriting once more and keep in mind how you are presenting yourself as it relates to branding. You have done yourself proud! Good Luck.

Sam Smith Sam Smith
Posts: 0

Alex, I found your design to have clean lines and easy navigation. It is appealing and straight forward and addresses its intended use very well. If pressed to make a suggestion; you may want to focus on the copywriting once more and keep in mind how you are presenting yourself as it relates to branding. You have done yourself proud! Good Luck.

Cesar Perez Cesar Perez
Posts: 0

I agree that taking another look at the copy would improve the site a great deal. There are a couple of instances where you mix "I" and "We" although both seem to be referencing yourself in regards to your company (but that's just if I had to nitpick).

One book I read (though I can't remember its name) addressed this issue by saying that while most people are afraid to use "I" when talking about their company online even if they're the sole proprietor or the only person involved. We (as in the general populace) tend to think of a business as a collection of individuals and therefore tend to gravitate toward a "We" approach when talking about business. But there's nothing wrong with letting people know it's just you out there. In fact, it can even be a plus if someone is looking for a dedicated individual whom they feel they can have a personal connection with.

All in all, I like the design's clean look and minimalist approach. It's really functional and shows that form follows function.

Jason Hyman Jason Hyman
Posts: 13

Where is the link to your site?



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